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The short sentences that the mother says are the best part of this piece. Worth liking it just for that. :)
The idea that the child (I'm assuming a girl here, but I could be wrong) hates the shell is very well established in the first portion, making a beautiful set up for the mother's cryptic statement.
Nothing was left unexplained except the mother's words, which I'm just going to ignore since it's very obvious that it is intentional.
This is a very well-done piece. I did notice a few grammar issues, but those are easily fixed. Over all, a lovely job.
Presents a deep idea in few words. In that way, it's like poetry.