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I love beaches and (due to the title) this seemed like a story about them. I also loved that line of waves "crashing."
the line of "waves crash against my knees" establishes that the narrator is at the beach. the dialogue between the narrator and their mom also builds character as the story progresses without having to tell us much.
nope! I think this was pretty clear.
Keep going! this looks like it's going in a great direction and I already love the theme that's popping up here :D
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