Peer Review by The Rebellious One! (South Africa)

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Begin Again

By: yapyapxy


FREE WRITING

Life has no real
beginning, a story
holds many starts

Friendship is a lifelong
puzzle, family 
a language, love an art

Each leaves footprints
and perhaps a few of them cut

But don’t be afraid, don’t
fear scabs and blood —
here’s to learning again, dearest
patchwork-mended heart


Message to Readers

second version; thank you for stopping by to read :')

Would "family/a language, love an art" be clearer with "family/is a language, love is an art"?


Peer Review

"But don’t be afraid, don’t fear scabs and blood — " I feel like this ends off the poem in such a powerful way.


Intrigued


What is the inspiration behind this piece?


Reviewer Comments

I love the free-verse and flow of the poem, it just makes your piece more fun to read. Keep on writing awesome stuff!