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second version; thank you for stopping by to read :')
Would "family/a language, love an art" be clearer with "family/is a language, love is an art"?
"But don’t be afraid, don’t fear scabs and blood — " I feel like this ends off the poem in such a powerful way.
What is the inspiration behind this piece?
I love the free-verse and flow of the poem, it just makes your piece more fun to read. Keep on writing awesome stuff!