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second version; thank you for stopping by to read :')
Would "family/a language, love an art" be clearer with "family/is a language, love is an art"?
I love the opening lines. I think they are so powerful and a great way to start off the poem.
Hope, like everything is going to be okay, like I can push a reset button and try again when I feel like giving up.
What was the inspiration for this piece?
This is a great piece with a beautiful amount of emotion in it and it reads so well together.
P.s I think " is a language/ love is an art" would sound better:)