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Any kind of feedback is great! I want to keep improving my writing :)
Fourth line down; I absolutely LOVE that line!
To me I got the emotion of free-ness, calm, yet there was something else that I cannot describe.
This piece is great. I love the rhyming and tones you set, and I really adore your use in words and the descriptiveness of it all. It's fantastic!