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I love the frist stanza, but especially the last line, "...lives a quaint little mouse." So cute and eye-catching!
I smiled(I know that's not a feeling, but I don't really know how to describe what I felt). It brought back tender memories from watching childhood movies.
What inspired you to write this cute poem?
Such a tender, sweet poem filled with the wonder and adventurous life a mouse lives.
Gorgeous words, and graceful lines! Fantastic job! I hope to read more of your writing soon!