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PROMPT: Open Prompt
If you were to tell a friend what this piece is about, what would you say?
What’s the greatest strength of this piece?
I like the part about a magic wand, it's such a cool way to describe it!
Is there a place in the piece where you wanted to know more, felt confused, or felt like something was lacking?
I like this piece a lot! It's so cute and carefree! Keep up the good work! :)
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