Peer Review by Peppermint Lemonade (United States of America)()

Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.

Tap on comment to view. Using a mouse?

Hover over comments to view. On a touch device?

Bubble Dreams

By: Ellie!

PROMPT: Open Prompt

A magic wand, I wish
to see
Shining bubbles streaming
Chasing and popping
The one that gets away
will fly
Around the world
to space.

Bubble dreams
The biggest first
to go
The smallest grow
Joining and rising
too high
to stop.

Peer Review


I like the part about a magic wand, it's such a cool way to describe it!

There isn't.

Reviewer Comments

I like this piece a lot! It's so cute and carefree! Keep up the good work! :)