Peer Review by Peppermint Lemonade (United States)

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Bubble Dreams

By: Ellie!


PROMPT: Open Prompt

A magic wand, I wish
to see
Shining bubbles streaming
behind
Chasing and popping
perhaps
The one that gets away
will fly
Around the world
to space.

Bubble dreams
bursting
The biggest first
to go
The smallest grow
Joining and rising
too high
to stop.


Peer Review

Bubbles!


I like the part about a magic wand, it's such a cool way to describe it!


There isn't.


Reviewer Comments

I like this piece a lot! It's so cute and carefree! Keep up the good work! :)