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Message to Readers
Griffin and Cameron are my main guy and girl characters. They are best friends from childhood to high school. It's them against the world. Damian has been kicked out of a lot of schools before he became the new kid at Griffin and Cameron's school.
Griffin: incredibly smart despite being slightly mentally/emotionally unstable (he's bipolar). He's also very organized
Cameron: Also fairly intelligent, but moreover creative, prepared, friendly, and technologically keeping up with the times
Damian: at first glance, the stereotypical "bad boy" rebel. He easily gets into trouble, doesn't care too much about school, and sounds like a flirt. Then again, he's probably sentimental considering he's carrying around this picture of a girl with him.
Griffin: his medication. It shows that although he is smart, he's very driven. When someone has an illness or disease, it's very easy to fall behind your classmates, but Griffin still manages to excel.
Cameron: The last item. It's just incredibly telling.
Damian: The picture of the girl. It's the one object that doesn't quite match everything else on his list.
Nice job! I really like these characters and can't wait to read a story with them in it.