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Yet now, I look at you, As I do, a stranger. I feel the insides of me groan, I can sense the danger. It’s so different now with you, I hate to think it’s true. But each time I look at you, The bright light now seems blue. These two stanzas moved me deeply.
I would like to know the back story because stanza 6, line 3 is an intriguing one.
This is a nice piece. Very relatable. Also your punctuation is good. Try to check your spellings so it won't convey a wrong message.