Part time writer, full time learner and liver of life
Just a rough draft of what I thought would be a cool comparison. Any feedback would be appreciated, especially suggestions about structure and form.
Written By: David Levitsky
June 20, 2015
The moon is a beautiful girl
that you can see
but cannot touch.
Waxing and waning, she teases you
revealing her splendor one moment,
concealing it the next.
Through the lens of your telescope
her powdery white mask shines bright,
but will you ever know what shines
on her darker side?
She dictates the mood of your heart
witht the ebb and flow of the tides.
Does she know what she means to you?
In your orbit
but out of your reach
all you can do is sigh
as you admire her from the beach.