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This is so sweet! You were really articulate in how you got your feelings down that fast. It makes the poem easier to read and understand, since I don't have to wade through stanza after stanza.
How have you changed for the better? What was different before? Adding this would ground your poem to the exterior world. Maybe add one more stanza of that, so that the length wouldn't get too long?? Also, more description words! If you had to name a color of how you felt before and after, what would it be???
Great job! I loved reading this. Have a great day!!!!!