Peer Review by GcD (United States)

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thanks to you

By: happy butterfly


FREE WRITING


and now i've got something more to lose
atleast it's you
i didn't expect to like you this much
it's something about how you're not afraid to love
you have changed me for the better


Peer Review

This is so sweet! You were really articulate in how you got your feelings down that fast. It makes the poem easier to read and understand, since I don't have to wade through stanza after stanza.


How have you changed for the better? What was different before? Adding this would ground your poem to the exterior world. Maybe add one more stanza of that, so that the length wouldn't get too long?? Also, more description words! If you had to name a color of how you felt before and after, what would it be???


Reviewer Comments

Great job! I loved reading this. Have a great day!!!!!