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Well, I've never been in a relationship myself but this was based off my teacher's story. And possibly my first crush.

I struggled a bit with the flow and rhythm, so do let me know how this can be improved upon! Any feedback is greatly appreciated and warmly welcomed.

remembering the First

February 8, 2017


Maybe he saw, maybe he cared.
Except, you know, he wasn't always there. 
You told me this was it and this was forever, 
Now that it's not, you gave up the endeavour.

Old places chafe with memories
And new ones aren't any better.
You can't sleep but time runs along--
Soon enough, you'll sing your own love song.



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