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Any would be good, but please no flames!
I like the part where you say that Maxine thought Savvanah's face was going to crack from glaring so hard. It's a nice image.
That Savvanah and Maxine don't get along most of the time.
Did you use an experience to build the story from?
I like this story and I think that is sounds like real life. Great Job!