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Mm....well, there are so many unique descriptions throughout this poem, but I love the first verse. :) And the 2nd, and the 3rd, and.....well.....I think you get the idea. ;)
Nostalgia, wistful, calm. Yeah, there's a mixture here. :) A beautiful, lovely, intricate mixture of emotions. :)
The rhyming in this is really great! And you did it without breaking up the rhythm much. :)
Keep up the great work! God bless!