Peer Review by #LemonFanatic! (Canada)

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Gossip

By: A_Whisper_in_the_wind


FREE WRITING


It’s erupts like
hot lava from an
active volcano.
Spreading like a
wildfire across the forest.
Carrying tales, 
Lies
myths

As it is told from one 
person to another.
It hides behind our back
Like a shadow.
Following us
wherever we go.
Words flowing out 
as easily as waterfalls.
Whispers flying in the wind
baring stories , changed 
as easily as the tides.
 

This piece is about how gossip spreads and how it’s kinda like broken telephone. You start by saying something and when it gets to the other side of the room it’s completely the opposite. It’s kind of how gossip and rumors are. 
anyways love to know what you thought of this piece!! :) 

Peer Review

I love this piece and how it opens our eyes to see how much our words can hurt. It was also very well written and the description is just stunning.


If you would add anything maybe add something about how we should instead use our words to build up each other up instead of tear down by gossiping!!


Reviewer Comments

I really enjoyed reviewing this piece. The description was stunningly amazing! And the point was well worth remembering. Great job:)

Have a great day,
Heidi