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l liked that your character was a reader, and that you elaborated on this quality by giving a notion as to what kind of books she liked to read.
Personally, I would like to see more of the relationship between Elizabeth and Tyler. Maybe answers to questions like what their true relationship status is or any complications readers might not suspect.
I was surprised about the informality in Tyler's kiss. It caught me off guard as it seems to have Elizabeth. This part in the story really made me slip into the character's shoes.