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The last line! The poem build an amazing mystery, trying to figure out the cliff's stubbornness, and the climax (For who would want to leave this view?) is so simple yet so satisfying!
I like how the writer has described the face of a cliff like that of an old man, and also compared his own weaknesses with some subtlety. Words like 'serene', 'fierce', wrinkles', are amazing descriptions!
The poem is fun to read! The writer creates a mysterious aspect, but ends it on such a simple note, which makes an 'Ahh!' effect. Thank you for writing this!