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Let me know what you think of the work, and possibly some ideas for a follow-up piece.
The forest and the sounds and sights that you explain so wonderfully.
I liked Mazie; the way you portray her is simply beautiful.
All of them. I wanted to know their backstory and how they came to be in the Hub. I wanted to know what their parents had done.
There's definitely mystery, but I didn't feel confused.
A smiling sadness yet sweetness.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. This story is simply amazing. I love the story in general and the characters, but I really, really loved how there was so much imagery and how you explained things in such beautiful detail.