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The tension displayed really grabbed me, making me want to read/watch more and more, to find out what happens.
None. I think it's amazing!
It's great! The mysteriousness is profound and perfect, that we get enough information, but not enough to give it all away.
Keep writing! It's superb!
Gorgeous job writing "Ruminations"! Keep it up!