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Message to Readers
Do you think this qualifies for fantasy? And what do you believe the moral to be?
One thing, out of many, that caught my attention and that made me think was the cage in which Time inhabits.
Time. I loved the way you showed him, made his image stick in my mind and made me want to hear more.
Time, the narrator. Reading his made me want to hear the characters' back stories, to know more about their lives and how they came to be at this point where you start the story.
No. I didn't get confused, but I still wonder about more of this world that you created.
Wonder. Amazement. Joy.
This was so beautiful! I don't have much to say; the wonder still clings to me and there aren't enough words to express what I felt and loved about this piece. It was just so amazing! I adore the way you told things, the way you started with the owl, then began into the narrator's life and perspective. The words you used, the language, the way you explained things, it was all flowing so perfectly and beautifully.