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Message to Readers
The MSM Writer's Club attended a Writer's Camp on the 23rd and 24th of May, with the theme Harry Potter. We were faced with a complication: Ramona Sky, a student at Mugwort's (our very own Hogwarts), did not make it onto the Mugwort's express. Here is my story. Feedback welcome.
Pretty interesting. It leaves one with a healthy number of questions, and perhaps an unhealthy amount of suspense! haha is there any more?