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Message to Readers
This is a dream I had last night. I thought it was interesting, and wanted to share. Let me know what you think.
I thought the "signature cutesy face" was especially intriguing. It helps tie the readers emotion into the story by thinking of someone *they* know with a signature cutesy face.
Because it was a dream, of course there are parts that would be confusing because we aren't you. but the place where I was confused was... the whole last half of the last paragraph. but I read it again and I understand it now.
the signature cutesy line.
I appreciate you sharing your dreams! haha the novel I am working on write now was inspired by a dream.