Luci Munday

Australia

She/her | Yr 7 | 13 y.o | ISTJ-T | Hamilfan | Potterhead | JATPer | Heightser | Fansen | Directioner | Livies | Ravenclaw | BLM | Feminist | Climate Action

est. 3/8/21

Why do you write like you're running out of time?

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Hi! I’m Luci! Thanks for dropping by my profile!

I’m a Hamilfan, Potterhead, Heightser, Fansen and JATPer. A HUGE Directioner of 4 or 5 months. I've recently gotten into Olivia Rodrigo as well, and I love Taylor Swift so bloody much.

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-Lin-Manuel Miranda
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-Julia Gillard
-Any and every 1D boy
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Tom Holland simp♥.

Shipper of Larry Stylinson♥.

In love with Emma Watson♥.

Yes, I AM a fan of Ed Sheeran - don't comment.

✧Have some tacos✧

the universe

November 24, 2021

FREE WRITING

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does the universe love me?
i understand it knows me,
but does it want me?
does it feel empty when i go,
or does it simply move on,
overlooking my existence?
does it realise that i need it,
or does it just forget -
does it forget,
or did it never know?
they say God knows,
that He knows all the hairs on your head,
but does the universe?
and if it does know,
does it care?
will it make an effort for me,
or just ignore the help i need,
the love i long for,

the condolence i need.
the world is ending as i think,

and when it's over,
and all the dust is gone,
will the universe take me in it's arms,
or will i fall,
                    fal
                         l,
                            f
                               a
                                   l
                                       l,
                                            into the stars?
                            

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4 Comments
  • crystalline•galaxies

    re: i definitely remember that verse from the year i studied luke. your take on it is so unique!


    9 days ago
  • crystalline•galaxies

    oh wow, this piece is gorgeous. i really like the formatting of the word "falling" near the end; i felt that it fit the whole vibe very well. "they say God knows,/that He knows all the hairs on your head,/but does the universe?" also struck a chord with me, kind of echoing in my head after i finished reading. plus, the whole personification of the universe is always one of my favorite things in poetry.

    re: thank you so much!


    10 days ago
  • Camillaroo-350

    Oh, the first line hit me so hard...
    Re: Yes, you can definitely use it as a prompt! Glad you liked it :)


    13 days ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    This is so delicate and unique. I love the last line, it's just so touching!


    13 days ago