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"up the hill that is really more of a small lump than a hill." It's very wordy, but it creates a very vivid image. The line about the foggy beanie is a good one too.
You did a great job appealing to sight: the images you describe easily come to mind. However, you didn't really appeal to any of the other senses, but you have opportunities to explore the other senses in the existing piece. Do the fields of yellow rapeseed have a particular smell? Do they remind you of the scent of a different flower? Is the headstone flat and smooth or more rough?
You gave a very honest, detailed description. I could tell this was your home just by the tone of voice: you highlighted the nice features, like the marble headstone, but weren't afraid to point out the flaws, such as the badly-signposted fork. You had a very humorous and sincere attitude.
You did a great job on this prompt, just some minor grammar issues and such. Overall, a very good read.