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This is my introduction piece. I am embarking on the long and treacherous journey of finding myself through the art of writing. Your constructive criticism and much-appreciated positive feedback is very welcome.
This is a beautiful piece of writing! I absolutely adore your exquisite word choice and sentence structure. The way you lead into this makes it so I connected with it. Your writing of this piece made me reflect on myself. This writing is truly amazing!