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Emma Clary

May 22, 2015

PROMPT: Inventory

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Name: Emma Clary 

Age: 15

Town: Indionapolis, Indiana

Country: United States

Things that are inside Emma's backpack:

1. A Harry Potter book

2. A wallet with spare change

3. Her phone

4. An extra phone charger

5. Earbuds

6. Another teen fiction book

From just the things in her bag you can tell that Emma is a somewhat quiet girl who enjoys reading and being on her phone listening to music tucked away from others. 

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2 Comments
  • Aspen Gray

    Oh, and I like the earbuds detail.


    over 2 years ago
  • Aspen Gray

    It's a good start, but I say dig deeper. What sets her apart from the average bookworm? Does she carry medicine, a Swiss army knife, a photograph of someone? If she travels light (like I do) then go to her suitcase. Excluding clothes (which might get a little boring, unless she wears some spectacular outfits), what would she take with her if she was suddenly forced on the run or something? As it is, I don't know what makes her unique, and that's what would be interesting to me as a reader and valuable to you as a writer. It does sound like she and I would get along quite well, though! :)


    over 2 years ago