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I Wish..

By: anonymous


10 Things I Wish Were True

1. Food was free.

2. Money grew on trees.

3. People always treated others fairly.

4. There was a cure for cancer.

5. You could forget a book that you've already read so that you can read it again.

6. I could remember everything I learn.

7. Everyone got their 'Knight in Shining Armour.'

8. No one would be homeless or starving.

9. Heaven had a telephone. 

10. And lastly, I wish it were true that wishes came true.



Peer Review

"Heaven had a telephone." I find it most interesting because I could talk to all the people that I have lost.


The items are tied together by feeling, because she really wants these things to be true.


Reviewer Comments

I really like number one.