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I had my first day of school today :) My school starts really late lol
It was an okay day.
hope you guys are well!
I like the story behind it that was said in the footnotes. Hearing the footsteps, which inspired u to write this. Also the first Stanza is really intriguing, especially the first line.
Maybe some additional details with writing the letter and the thoughts about wondering if they should write an eternity of thoughts before they die. I did get a little bit lost around the end.