BizzleWrites

Australia

I'm Issy.
I'm 14 and an aspiring artist and author.
She/her
Black Lives matter.
Likes:
Bi puns
Murder mystery TV shows
Art
Shakespeare poetry
Dislikes:
I can't even be bothered writing them all down
.
Goodbi
Have a nice day

Message from Writer

Remember to write even if you think you are bad at it, you're not

Check out my amazing WTW friend Ava Marie!

Please read The Gentleman's Guide to Vice and Virtue by Mackenzi Lee, it is seriously amazing. I also recommend The Candy Makers by Wendy Mass, and anything by Becky Albertalli.

If you wanna chat or do review for review comment on one of my pieces :)

You are all amazing and fanatstic have a nice day take care of yourself you are loved!! :)

Hail

September 12, 2021

FREE WRITING

4
Hail 
Round fat drops of frozen water 
Plummeting from an innocent looking cloud 
Rain 
Hail 
The sky is screaming 
Trying to tell me 
This isn't for the best 
Just a walk 
That's all I asked for 
But now the sky is wailing 
Hail from the clouds 
Rain 
Rain 
Rain 
Thunder 
The sky is shouting 
Telling me to stop pining over 
Someone I could never have 
Shut up sky 
I'll write my own destiny. 

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2 Comments
  • SnowLeopard06

    I love the repetition, and how you compared the storm outside to the one inside, you know?


    14 days ago
  • solarflair

    nice! i love the movement in this poem. what was your inspiration for the repetition of text?


    15 days ago