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Hello! I would appreciate it so so much if you could tell me things you would improve from this poem, including the title. Thanks!
heyy, thanks for reviewing my piece! this was relatable for me and i have written similar pieces and i absolutely loved this. the describtions were absolutely amazing and the word choices were just fabulous.
this was very descriptive and i dont think anthing would need to be added. the concept was clear and concise and yet you found a way for me to want to read more and visualise the scene. wonderful job!!
this was so great. im glad to know that im not the only 13yr old here. a small favour to ask. would u mind reviewing my piece 'the man in the dream'. thanks. iabsolutely loved this and u should never stop writing. ur writing is wonderful and so are u! <3 HPgirl2021