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I don’t do a lot of poetry, so *anythinggg* would be greatly appreciated c:
Have an amazing day!!!
The characterization of Winter and Robin is lovely! You've done a great job personifying them while maintaining the raw and natural core of what they are, especially for Winter.
I love it. You used it very naturally, and it was a delightful surprise when I noticed it, as I hadn't seen the prompt beforehand. The poem overall is folksy and familiar, and feels like something that should be read every year around Christmastime.
You use beautiful language in a very effective way, and I really enjoyed reading this! I became emotionally attached to Winter as I read this piece, and so the last few stanzas definitely left an impact!