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My favorite line is, "The sky is not a monster under the bed,/ only the gentle silk of morning" (4-5). This line is my favorite because the writer relates to the sky to a "monster under the bed", which I just think is such a creative analogy. Furthermore, he/she is saying that we should appreciate the sky for its placidity and its place in nature, and I like the pleasant tone that this establishes early on in the piece.
The writer evokes a tone and feeling by providing lots of natural imagery spanning from the first stanza all the way to the last line fifth stanza.
Overall, I think the piece truly is strong in that it addresses the prompt very well, its nature imagery is superb and the writer's ability to connect nature to humanity shows great writing prowess. In a second draft, I would perhaps only recommend trying to establish a more consistent line and stanza structure as to help it flow just a little bit smoother. Overall though, the piece is strong, and the writer seems to be a natural with poetry. I hope to see more pieces from this writer on Write the World!