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I absolutely loved this text! Especially the quote: " At some point, you get tired of waiting."
I could perfectly understand that Alex likes/loves Sarah, who doesn't give her enough attention.
Kind of, I would like something other than the "she pulled away" that tells me that Alex is a girl. Also, I would enjoy having some more info on Alex and Sahra's relationship, are they, friends? Classmates?
This is honestly a beautiful poem, keep writing! You got this,