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Message to Readers
"Yeah, Who am I? Someone that's afraid to let go ,uh?
I enjoyed the personification of the pillow this poem! It was interesting to read a piece that, rather than addressing a person, talked directly to an inanimate object. The repetition and italicized words also stood out to me, because they added to the overall meaning by emphasizing the parts of you that you like to hide away and only show your pillow.
Although it was creative of you to end the poem with a question to leave the readers thinking, the question did not seem to tie in with the overall poem. The previous stanzas only were about the pillow, and did not have any mention of humans, so the question seemed out of place. Maybe in the previous lines where you appreciate what the pillow does for you, you could add in a few comparisons of how humans fail to do that, so the question at the end would fit.
This was a really creative idea! I was entertained by reading this, and related to most of it