don't you see the starlight (#TS)

United States

WtW's "cool cousin you see once a year, but the conversation you guys were having... picks up where it left off without missing a beat" (rosi)

Daughter of God

jr in HS
VB~running
10.5.20
sporadically here

Message to Readers

you might know what it's like. it's only grown stronger since i saw him.

achings.

July 17, 2021

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    i didn't understand
    it's possible to miss someone as much
    as i miss him
    even though he's only a half hour and a busy schedule away

aching and bittersweet
i replay every second of his fingers on me
trailing down my shoulder
moving back and forth over my thumb
    
    i hear his attempts at steady breathing
    hear myself do the same
    hear his heartbeat pounding against his ribcage
    as he holds me against him 
    hear the creek ripple and the birds chirp
    what more could i ask for?

sitting with him
eyes closed, feeling his warmth everywhere
breathing him in like he's sweeter than oxygen

    my goodness, i miss him
    it aches
    i ache.
just some late night ramblings of a foolishly lovesick poet wannabe. :)

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6 Comments
  • Anne Blackwood

    Thank you so much for the spam!


    2 months ago
  • Renegade_Writer [ChildOfGod]

    :°-( <3 >---0-0---


    2 months ago
  • GertyGerty

    re: Hey! It's been awhile since I was on here, but i just read your comments and thank you so much ahaha. Also, I don't actually have a record label, I just use an online music distributor so that I can release it myself.
    I love this work btw! I think we can all relate a bit to late night lovesick poetic ramblings :")


    2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    <3<3<3


    2 months ago
  • _streaks_of_stars_

    also i love the footnotes :))


    2 months ago
  • _streaks_of_stars_

    i loved this! uieiwgw8agfah ahhhh so beautiful and i love the pain that u captured for it makes me totally understand the ache <3


    2 months ago