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Feedback on this fortuitous thing is very much appreciated.
What delighted me about this piece was the good use of repetition with "let me dream" and the good rhyming pattern. Not only that, you go into a lot of depth about your likes like "elf ears" or "purple seashells", which is good because it shows how multifaceted you are. Very nice.
What else inspired you to write this piece and how did you feel before/after writing it.
Hello cookie.smuggler, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer and I very much enjoyed reviewing this piece. I found it to be especially well rhymed and while there are some things in need of improvement, it's still a really good piece. I fully encourage you to keep writing and have a wonderful day.