Jasmin khawar

India

ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʟɪQᴜᴇꜰʏ ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏᴏɴ
ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ?
•~•
ᴡᴇʟʟ, ᴜɴꜰᴏʀᴛᴜɴᴀᴛᴇʟʏ ɪ ꜱᴏʟɪᴅɪꜰɪᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ •_•

Message to Readers

It's dark.

maleficent (i) don't have a fairytale~

August 1, 2021

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longing for the surreal golden depiction
about dreamflum reflected, distorted in glass? ocean?
apple: poisoned. turned to stone(maybe emerald)
i wonder: why it's impossible to think of God's downfall?
i wonder: why it's impossible to think of Lucifer as God?
maybe that's why I've no fairytale. I'm fairy . . .
that's how my concepts are as drunk as an alcoholic water lily
engraving my heart in an ancient brass. I'm dimming . . .
all princesses are running away with their princes, am i the only one left with the moon?
painting of you, hypnotizing me am i on drugs? it dies. i start to run
flames dwelling inside me gives me a sculpture of a villain of one's reverie
angle's wings looks like devil's, when i shut my eyes
i look like maleficent when they shut there's
wiped black stardust off the lips
burring my broken wings in . . .dust
i'm fairy
without a fairytale
Lowercase is intentional

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9 Comments
  • Ava Marie

    This piece is stunning and loved everything about it!!!


    3 days ago
  • Parisienne

    re: thank you so much! Such a lovely compliment, you really made my day :)
    Really enjoyed this piece, the darkness and anger are almost tangible through your writing. Loved the line 'all princesses are running away with their princes, am i the only one left with the moon?', beautifully relatable.
    Have a great day :)


    10 days ago
  • musicforlife

    This is beautiful! Your diction is so good:) And i love the metaphors you used!!
    Re: Awe, thanks soo much! Means a lot to me:)


    11 days ago
  • _streaks_of_stars_

    omg i love this - its twisted in a interesting way and i love it


    14 days ago
  • boston

    if i had the energy to explain how much i love this i would go off but for now i'll just say that it's one of my favorite pieces ever.


    15 days ago
  • Odyssey

    That was amazing!


    15 days ago
  • NewPoet

    This was so beautiful, I have tears in my eyes!


    15 days ago
  • Nikki

    re: omggggg ahhh thank you so much! im so glad you enjoyed them <3


    17 days ago
  • asiyahsultana

    Your use of figurative language added a lot to this piece and touched my emotions!


    18 days ago