Peer Review by Christy (United States)

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Really Trying

By: Elise Clift


PROMPT: Countdown

Nobody understands how hard it is trying to please everyone.

It's hard trying to live up to everyone's expectations.

It's an everyday struggle that can become overwhelming.

I never want to let anyone down.

I'm trying to be the best.

Don't give up on me.

Let me be myself.

I'm doing it.

Have patience.

Believe.



Peer Review

Very relatable, and understandable.


Very creative, and good with words considering you have to count down.


She continues the story with more words. Just to see the ending to see what happens.


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