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I admire how a word or a sentence can trigger some of her memories and she finds pieces of who she is. I also love how a doctor shows her a secret the Council is keeping from the rest of society.
I think this piece would be the most accurate thing that would happen if these events ever took place. This piece isn't over the top futuristic either and I love that. It's realistic in a sci-fi kind of way if that makes sense.
I think a part two would be awesome. Or a piece that would be more in her future a bit, after she chose what problems to solve and have her speak of the memories that got her to that place in time and how she solved those problems.
I think it's all good. However the author improves the draft I'm sure would be amazing.
Thank you for being the first person to review my piece, Nyctophilia.