Lizzie R

United States

16
She/her
Virgo
Aspiring singer/songwriter
All of my songs are original unless specified as a rewrite in the title :)

"Today you called me pretty when you saw me in a yellow sundress - you've never called me pretty before." -Duplicity

Message to Readers

Currently listening to:

Got You On My Mind - NF

Fresh Start

June 20, 2021

FREE WRITING

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We don’t work anymore
Though I wish we did
Every time you walk out that door
My heart breaks a little more
It seems like I can’t keep you happy
No matter how hard I try

I think we need some time apart
We need to separate for a while
Some time apart will do us good in the long run
And while it pains me to say it
What we need is a fresh start

Maybe we can still be friends 
If you let me in 
Please don’t hate me
Deep down you know it’s for the best
We can move on and you won’t be tied down

I think we need some time apart
We need to separate for a while
Some time apart will do us good in the long run
And while it pains me to say it
What we need is a fresh start

Don’t tell me you still care
The decision is already made
I’m stepping back and letting you move on
Take this opportunity, don’t waste it

Because I think we need to be apart
We need to separate for good
I can’t be with you anymore
And while it pains me to say it 
What we need is a fresh start
It’s time to say goodbye, goodbye
 
I took a hiatus from songwriting because life got chaotic but I'm back now and I wrote this earlier. It's completely made up but hopefully, someone can relate to it and it invokes some sort of emotion within you. As always I love and support you all :)

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  • Parisienne

    LIZZIE!! THIS IS GORGEOUS! IT'S LIKE A BREAKUP BUT SORT OF HAPPY IN A STRANGE SENSE. MIXED EMOTIONS. I LOVE IT!!!
    Re: Ayyyy you're backkkk!! Great to see you around again Lizzie! I'm so sorry you have been struggling with family drama, althouth this probs won't help I'm always on the end of my email if you need to chat to someone. My family is in tatters at the moment too, so I sort of relate. Anyways, I hope things are better for you now and sending love and hugs your way.
    Honestly, I would be so honoured if you would send me demos of your amazing songs before they get released (of course they will! You are so gonna make it). You're even better than Taylor (not even just being nice, I thought your voice was incredible compared even to Queen swift).
    Thanks so much for your comments on my sci fi story! Aha IK my cliffhanger was a bit cruel butttt what can I say? Being a writer gives me the power to be evil meuaghahaha :).
    I love podcasts and books, plus the combination of that with your voice would be perfect!! Do it!!!
    Lots of love and please take care of yourself. Here if you need me!!
    Becca <3


    4 months ago