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A Cold Glass of Water (Read Footnotes!)

June 13, 2021


What is a glass of water to me?

So refreshing,
like Autumn blowing its crisp breath
A glass of water.

So cold,
like a gentle snowfall in Winter’s reign
A glass of water.

The ice tinkles,
like the fairies laugh in Spring’s soft call
A glass of water.

It greets you,
Pausing the intense heat radiating from Summer’s gaze.
A glass of water. 

What is a glass of water to you?
Hey everyone! I was just thinking how fortunate I am to have accessible water in my house! Utah is going through a big drought, so I decided to write about it! I would like you (if you want to) to write about something you didn’t realize you were or are thankful of until it was lacking or gone. Just a small optional challenge!


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  • SamRose

    Re: Aw tysm! Will do!!

    Also, yes, I am so glad we have water too! It is so HOT in Utah this summer, right? And the drought... it's just kind of sad. Everything's dead XD

    about 2 months ago
  • The_Sunrise_Queen

    isn't Utah always on a drought???!!!!! XD
    also this is soo good! I love your similes and metaphors!
    you did the wrong grammar in one part :)

    about 2 months ago
  • Mpm#1

    This. This right here my dude, is good poetry. I hope you guys get some rain soon!
    Re: Awww thank you so much!

    about 2 months ago