SnowBallad

United States

I love writing! Whether it's nonfiction, fiction, (well, okay, mostly fiction), screenplays, plays, music, poetry, I will write it. Please review my writing!

Message from Writer

"Everyone deserves a chance to fly. So if I'm flying solo, at least I'm flying free."
-Elphaba Thropp

"We believe a lot of things that aren't true. We call it history."
-The Wonderful Wizard of Oz

Malia

November 5, 2016

FREE WRITING

1
THE TEXTS


10/11/16

derek233. hey
derek233. u there
derek233. i know ur there, malia
derek233. come on 
derek233. malia, i can see the "read at 2:37 pm" thing
derek233. malia.
derek233. MALIA!!!!

10/12/16

derek233. listen.
derek233. we haven't talked in days.
derek233. I
derek233. mali, im sorry
derek233. rly
derek233. please answer me

10/14/16

derek233. why weren't you at school?
derek233. malia?

10/17/16

derek233. malia, i feel really bad
derek233. it's my fault that ur staying home
derek233. isn't it
derek233. i shouldn't have said it
derek233. malia
derek233. please read this
derek233. i hate not being able to see you
derek233. please come to school tommorow

10/22/16

derek233. malia, please
derek233. your mom says that your still at home and that u might do homeschool
derek233. pls come.

10/23/16

derek233. yay you read them!
derek233. the texts.
xxmaliaxx. derek
derek233. wt
xxmaliaxx. i forgive you

10/24/16

derek233. malia
derek233. please come back tommorow
xxmaliaxx. this is malia's therapist.
derek233. ok can i text malia?
xxmaliaxx:
derek233. what's wrong
xxmaliaxx. malia isn't here derek
xxmaliaxx. she's been gone for a week
derek233. oh ok who texted me last night
xxmaliaxx. her mom was drunk
derek233: weird where's malia
xxmaliaxx. gone
xxmaliaxx. i'm sorry honey i have to go

THE NOTE


I'm done. I don't feel things. I don't even feel pain, anymore. I don't even feel sorry. I'm just empty. Nothingness. And nothingness hurts a lot more than pain.
And that's why I have to say goodbye, Mama.

So goodbye, Mama.

-Malia


THE FILE

Date: 10/18/16
Name: Anders, Malia.
Age: 17
Sex: F
Condition: Bipolar Depressive
Medication: Various
State: Unkown. Suspected suicide.

THE TRUTH

10/10/16

xxmaliaxx. derek
derek233. what
xxmaliaxx. i know that text is a bad way to say this
xxmaliaxx. but
xxmaliaxx. i love you
derek233. oh

THE WISH

3/4/17

derek233. haley
haleysanerd. what
derek233. do you think malia ever knew
haleysanerd. that you loved her back?
haleysanerd. of course she did
haleysanerd. derek
haleysanerd. none of this is your fault
derek233. it is tho
haleysanerd. no it isn't
derek233. haley, i was the one who never said ily back. i was the one who started the whole thing. i was the one who should've died.
haleysanerd. derek
haleysanerd. malia's gone. that's done.
derek233. i know
haleysanerd. you can't change it
derek233. i wish
haleysanerd. yeah
haleysanerd. i think we all do
haleysanerd. i think we all wish
 

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