HighEntropy

India

concerned deeply about climate change
fan of myths and superheroes

love to vent, love reading vent pieces <3

get my stuff banned more times than I'd like :'(

Message to Readers

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Superficial Problems - A Spoken Word

September 16, 2021

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Hi Divya
What's up Divya
Your hamster died?
Just get another one, bhai.
Oh ananya 
You feel like your family is falling apart ananya?
You feel like people leave when you become vulnerable ananya?
There are people in Africa ananya
Who cant go to bars to meet friends ananya 
Children abandoned by their families ananya 
Your problems are invalid.
Hey rohan
You feel as if you're losing control of your life rohan?
You feel as if you're burdened with a nice brain rohan?
There's girls in villages who can't go to schools rohan
There parents can't send them to coaching rohan
Their basic necessities aren't fulfilled like yours. 
You're privileged and this is the path for you rohan.
Stop saying you don't know if you want this,
Many people would die for it rohan.
Sup Priya 
Your feelings are invalid priya.
Your PC broke and you can't get a new one priya?
You are sunk in college debt priya?
Priya, stop bringing negatives vibes.
No one wants to hear about your pathetic sad self
No one cares about your pathetic sad self
You are so self absorbed in your pathetic depressed self
Think of children who don't even have clothes to wear priya.
That child would love to have a broken PC priya. 
And while their try to fix their PC, try to fix yourself priya.
Without sharing your sad depressed pathetic privileged thoughts here priya.
You don't matter.
 
"bhai" is a slang used for friends in Hindi.
 

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6 Comments
  • ava_grace

    Re: Ah, see I saw it that way too, I just wasn't sure what the intention was. Still valid message. Humans do invalidate a lot of things.
    Re: Also, love your new profile pic! XD


    10 days ago
  • ava_grace

    Ah yes, first-world problems. The fault of humanity.


    10 days ago
  • Ombreluna

    Wow. It really touched me. It's a simple poem with a deep meaning. I can totally relate to the poem.


    4 months ago
  • Nikki

    so sadddddd. also i love the indian namessss, it adds such an authentic touch


    4 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    D:>


    4 months ago
  • The_Sunrise_Queen

    oh my gosh this is so sad!!!


    4 months ago