serein

United States

[Child of God]
formerly "in_love_with_writing"
Call me Ari if you like. (or any other nickname--my name is ariana)
Girl | INFJ-T | aspire to be teacher, (author?) | ATEEZ| I'm not half as obsessed with kpop as I seem...

Message from Writer

Shoutout to my lovely friends (go follow them!)
AliMuscles04
rainey grace
Lata B.
Ren
Rohan's Defender (my ranting about kpop buddy)
✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

probably headbanging to ATEEZ, and/or crying to "She's in the Rain" by The Rose.

serein: the fine rain that falls from a clear sky at sunset or in the early hours of the night.

Rant at me in the comments--I'm sooooo bored.

#giveusbackourwords

(lol I would put song recommendations here, but I don't want to scare y'all.)

unheard

May 29, 2021

FREE WRITING

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her throat is parched, dry and crumbling into sand.
all these words clawing to get out--
long-fingered hands reaching for air
dripping with zeal, with the desire of expression.

alas, her mouth is sealed shut,
killing off communication, and with it
that last spark from fire of passion.

and she's all that's left.
a girl and the chaos of the thoughts in her mind.

can you hear me?
I'm sorry--this is really bad. I've been struggling to write lately. I have so many things to say, but I literally don't know how to express it. So my thought was just to force myself to write, and maybe that ability will come back again? I don't know sorry.
(Also that last line is from my favorite song "She's in the Rain" by The Rose)

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9 Comments
  • Coeur

    this perfectly encompasses what writers' block feels like--! the first stanza is really cool though, it's wording is powerful and pretty raw, like Avril said.


    4 days ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    Re: aw thanks XD
    Also, ariana is a lovely name <3


    5 days ago
  • Avril

    re: thanks, that means a lot :)


    7 days ago
  • Avril

    oh wow this feels raw and intense and I love it! "long-fingered hands reaching for air/dripping with zeal, with the desire of expression" - I felt that.


    10 days ago
  • ChimChim_1

    Re: Aww, I purple you too!!


    19 days ago
  • ~rain~

    re: aw thank youuu
    and yeso that's us, the marvel- er- geeks? idk hahaa i'm so tired- i went to a water park today and i'm totally braindead :/ anyway how are you? (BTW I LOVVVVE BTS'S NEW SONG BUTTER IT IS AHHHHHH lolll)


    19 days ago
  • ~rain~

    wow... this is so beautiful yet so sad...
    (also my name changed, it's now ~rain~ instead of rainey grace :)


    20 days ago
  • HighEntropy

    C'est genial! Love the descriptive way in which you have talked about her words.. (and about the footnotes, you're so awesome.. try some prompts. You'll push thought it :)


    20 days ago
  • alwayswriting

    omg I have goosebumps... i love the "clawing" and the "long-fingered hands", great use of words/imagery!

    Re: thanks for your comment, it was so sweet<3


    21 days ago