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This is such a fun little look at idioms, and the silly things they mean that we don't really think about. It also has such a positive feel, which I really like. A sort of "yay, let's just be nice, and have fun!" kind of feeling, which I really love. Aside from that, it's also written very well, which just makes the whole thing work.
I mentioned this in the highlighted parts, but I think you could add a section where the narrator tries to figure out why we say such weird things, and why they're sometimes negative. Again, I don't really think the piece needs it, it's great without it, but if you wanted to extend it, I think that's the most natural place to do it.
This is such a fun poem, and was really fun to review! I know the review is a little out of the blue, but I just have a tendency to do that, and thought this piece looked so fun. It's amazing, and I hope this review was helpful, even just a little bit!