Brightness Eden

United States

7th Grade Nerd
Hardly stops reading
District 4 tribute/Ravinpuff/Shadowhunter/Wizard/Demigod/Cosmere Geek/Dragon Friend/ Adventurer/Ranger/Heir of Isildur/Narnian/ Protector of the Seven Relms/etc.
Will happily review any work!
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Message to Readers

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May 28, 2021


Do you ever see a balloon floating across the sky.
I do, I just did, 
it was a star, but doesn’t twinkle
it smiled, but there was no happiness behind
It drifted lazily, beautiful against the bright blue sky;
yet it brought no joy. 

It made me sad.
To think that some happy child lost something,
something meant to bring joy. 

I sometimes feel like a floating balloon,
Smiling, but not happy;
I know from past experience that I will eventually get through.

You Can Do This!
If you are Drifting, grab hold of something.
I was feeling a little down lately, like I was drifting, so I wrote this. Just know Someone loves you. I love you!

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1 Comment
  • The_Sunrise_Queen

    this is so sad and sweet, but powerful at the same time! good job!
    Ima submit a review for this :)

    2 months ago