Brightness Eden

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7th Grade Nerd
Hardly stops reading
District 4 tribute/Ravinpuff/Shadowhunter/Wizard/Demigod/Cosmere Geek/Dragon Friend/ Adventurer/Ranger/Heir of Isildur/Narnian/ Protector of the Seven Relms/etc.
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Pain Sent Through Love

May 17, 2021


Ripping out my heart,
Stabbing me in the back;
You made the aching start,
Almost like a heart attack;

As some people say,
you're fictional and fake;
But i can spend all day,
Hurting for your sake;

Leaving me broken,
Crying on the bed;
the words left unspoken,
depressed that you are dead.

This is how I felt after finishing Mockingjay. And Maze Runner. And Harry Potter. And those millions of other books I've read. Any Suggestions on how I can Improve my poetry skills are welcome. Enjoy!


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  • Sophiascb

    re- haha thank you! ;)
    literally me every time I read anything. why am I doomed to get so attached to people that *sobs* aren't *sobs* real?

    3 months ago
  • The_Sunrise_Queen

    haha I love this.
    <3 to anyone who's ever fallen in love with a fictional character!

    3 months ago