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Message to Readers

asteria
female | greek | "star"
anglicized spelling of the greek goddess of justice, who later became the virgo constellation

asteria

August 27, 2021

FREE WRITING

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starlight shines in her eyes,
glitters in her hair,
and trickles down her face as
crystalline tears

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10 Comments
  • Brightness Eden

    Re: thank you! I’m debating on whether I should publish chapter 1, because i wrote it on a different website. Do you think i should?


    about 2 months ago
  • Brightness Eden

    This piece is beautiful! Also, i love your profile picture!


    about 2 months ago
  • Cucoolchameleon

    Re: thank you for your encouraging comment! So many girls struggle with body image- I've been one of them and my poem was for all of them. We really need to learn to love our whole selves, not compare ourselves to others. Until then, I'll keep fighting to stay positive:)


    about 2 months ago
  • _streaks_of_stars_

    i also love the message to the readers thing <33


    about 2 months ago
  • _streaks_of_stars_

    omggg i love the whole imagery
    gosh, this was so, so, so good. I love it AHHH yewuagduywguyd so much bro.
    DUDE, you're such a great writer. Okay, sorry for gushing loll.
    Anyways, I love the whole star reference and I just-
    I just love it <33 Great job!


    about 2 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    Wow... the imagery here is fantastic and the whole thing is really beautiful
    Also, I love your bio!!


    2 months ago
  • asiyahsultana

    This paints a vivd picture in my mind in just a few lines, well done!


    2 months ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    This is so stunning and gorgeous! I love how you described tears as "crystalline"


    3 months ago
  • The_Sunrise_Queen

    this is sooo beautiful!


    4 months ago
  • Ellie!

    ooh pretty :) your profile pic is so cool, by the way! *reading your message from writer* I also have a plethora of book beginnings lol... here's to finishing them in 2021!


    4 months ago