HeyThereRose

United Kingdom

17
welsh
perpetual state of confusion
probably procrastinating
nothing is real
have a good day
she/her

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I don't reply to comments often sorry but they are very very very much appreciated <3
Y'all are beautiful people btw (:

wedding of the waves

May 4, 2021

FREE WRITING

5
a waste of a wedding ring prompt by @encapsulated_emotions!

the gold band wont tarnish no mater how many times i throw it into the surf and then 
drop to my knees, fingers scrabbling with stones
to save it from the waves

i dont really know the symbolism of rings
im sure you did
probably muttered it to me like waves upon the sand while i burrowed 
into your arm
i reckon the circle of the ring is probably meant to mean 
eternity
joint forever
i reckon the constant gold is supposed to mean
unblemished loved 
forever

but not forever
even the vows acknowledged that;
till death do us part
till death -
i guess
i never expected death to come so soon

you told me life was like the sea -
you cannot stop the tide from going out
i couldnt stop you from leaving 
me

but now every day i stand upon the shore
begging the water to stay
to stay
just once 
just once. 

 

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4 Comments
  • Written_In_Water

    ooo I loved the end


    about 1 month ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Re: Thx! happy writing :)


    4 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    I think im gonna steal the resident ghost writer part if you dont mind, pls lmk if you do mind heh. i think it fits me nicely now :P


    5 months ago
  • encapsulated_emotions

    this is amazing go youuuu eeeeeeeeeee


    5 months ago