Cosmogyral

United States

'cosmogyral' means to twirl around the universe but i'm just caleb.

Message to Readers

yo.

someone will call me by the name of a monster

May 5, 2021

FREE WRITING

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A collection of poems under one title.

十六

when had it come apparent that
only dead eyes stared back at me?
babe,
i don't think i like me anymore.
i like reading the last line with a voice crack. adds to the dramatics. can you guess the pov? i bet you probably won't, I've been told my writing in this sense happens to be just a bit unorthodox.

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3 Comments
  • Kinsano

    The room left for interpretation is huge. LOVE IT. It is amazing.


    9 days ago
  • dee’s abditory

    *looks down at my chest to see this poem stabbing me in the heart* oh, well thats nice- *voice crack*

    ALSO I RE-READ IT THE SAY THE FOOTNOTES SAID AND I KID YOU NOT I ALMOST CRIED ASOBOAFVADJL CALEB STOP BEING SO A M A Z I N G


    9 days ago
  • Paisley Blue

    djhfsldulasiudfh this makes my heart hurt in the most lovely way....... :[]


    9 days ago